Fiona here from the Summer Learning Journey. I really enjoyed reading your comic strip! I like the way you used interesting words in your captions like gross, weird and chew. They make your comic really intriguing - ka pai!
Have you ever been fishing and caught a fish? I enjoy eating fish but prefer it when other people catch them for me...I also find fish catching a bit gross (-:
Maybe next time you could write a short description about the task on your blog so readers could learn a bit more about what you had to do. You could also tell us what you enjoyed the most or what you found tricky.
I can't wait to read more of your blogs. Keep up the excellent work over the summer! Fiona (SLJ)
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I really enjoyed reading your comic strip! I like the way you used interesting words in your captions like gross, weird and chew. They make your comic really intriguing - ka pai!
Have you ever been fishing and caught a fish? I enjoy eating fish but prefer it when other people catch them for me...I also find fish catching a bit gross (-:
Maybe next time you could write a short description about the task on your blog so readers could learn a bit more about what you had to do. You could also tell us what you enjoyed the most or what you found tricky.
I can't wait to read more of your blogs. Keep up the excellent work over the summer!
Fiona (SLJ)
i relly like it keep up the good work
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