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Thursday, September 10, 2020

Giraffe stuck up a tree

 Giraffe stuck up a tree


Bob was a very tall giraffe and he liked to eat wet grass in the jungle. It was a sunny day and the sky was very blue and there were white clouds.  The big  green trees were swaying in the wind and there was a smell of dusty dirt and wet delicious grass and the sound of birds chirping in the sky. 


Then a tiger comes running out from a bush so the giraffe runs and rams because he was scared. The giraffe was worried where to go then he saw a tree in front of him so he jumped and climbed the tree. There was another issue. He got stuck up in the tree.   Bob was calling out for help, but now one could hear him. 


Bob was trying to get out of the tree but he could not get off the tree. He was worried and  scared how to get down, his arms hurt because he was trying to get off the tree, but he could see a beautiful view. 


Two days passed but no one came to help him. two men were swimming in a lake.  Bob was screaming Help! Help! But they could  not hear  because he was too far away. When they finished swimming, they were going home. Bob screamed as loud as he could,really loud. Someone heard Bob so he said to his friend hey look at the giraffe. 


Then the men ran to the giraffe. Then some people came to cut the tree and grabbed him.  He was so happy that he got down off the tree.


I,am a blue level in my writing 


1 comment:

  1. Hi Ansu

    Thanks for sharing your narrative writing. I know you have worked hard to show a clear beginning, middle and end to your story.
    What is your next writing goal now that you are a blue level writer.
    What would you like to work on next?

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